Co-Motion

an old owl shudders
a cacophony of geese -
wildly breaking wind

5/7/2020

An Haiku with motions
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Roper Avatar
May 10, 2020 at 2:27 AM
Fantastic Haiku, John, congratulations. Eve
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 9:51 PM
I am loving the winners on this list and yours is no exception. BIG congrats, John
Ashley Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 9:00 PM
A cacophony, indeed! Such great sensory imagery, John. Congratulations on your excellent win in Tania's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Rodrigues Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 9:31 AM
LOL...great! Congratulations, John!
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May 9, 2020 at 5:57 AM
John, congratulations on your winning placement. I enjoyed this, interesting and unique imagery!
Lawless Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 7:30 AM
Thank you Tania. I have been on a quiet pond when the geese descended. They are the definition of the word cacophony.
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