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Written: January 30, 2024 ________________________________________ I will craft melodies for all humanity, Lyrics for both youth and elderly. Drafting melodies akin to vanity, Anytime, they dance for it tenderly. Not designed to play in sword fights, Neither for bloodshed nor conflicts. But chimes that excite human lights, With upped vitality—plenty of spirits. Let me compose songs for the weak, When life is stressful and delirious. Hearts will steadily release their bleak, With no fear of losing, seem imperious. Allow me to sing a song for the youth, Before they elapse along their way. Musical displays of devotion and sooth, Floating by carrying out life's freeway. For the poor and starving, I'd sing, When blackness obscures their sight. Of bright and quiet homes' strings, A place where there will be no night. Our planet is tattered and restless, Needs a clean and powerful melody. To silence the jangles and zestless, Of grief, pain, or iffy, cop a remedy. Lyrics to ease everyone despair, Until there is no more war or crime. Alas, man's spirit will grow and care, Peace may be woven rather than grime.
 

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Date: 2/9/2024 11:48:00 PM
Its a big ask mate..' And Jesus is the only one Whos able..' We are going to be heartily sick of The results of human attempts to 'fix it' soon if We get to 2030 without a major enslavement And counter uprising event I'll be surprised..? Or the ww 3 or some man-u-factored sort of Problem..I mean forcing independant food Growers to set-aside land to be unproductive.?? Then be moan lack of food.!!??!!?? Good write Though mate in its desire (Sotto for president I would rather!)
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Date: 1/31/2024 5:51:00 AM
WOW! such a graceful poem in service of the less fortunate. ---Let me compose songs for the weak, When life is stressful and delirious--For the poor and starving, I'd sing, When blackness obscures their sight---words that toll blissful thoughts in service of humanity, my friend.
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Date: 1/30/2024 4:21:00 PM
the title of your poem was ideal, for your poem spoke of the beautiful potential of community. But alas, 'our planet (community) is tattered and restless' -- a fact that saddens me. I believe there's great hope in song, music, and poetry to inspire hope and faith in our shared humanity. Your poem encourages readers to join in the melody--inspirational and uplifting. I sincerely enjoyed the read; your voice was calm as you read your poem--a calm that the world needs. your poetess friend, Sara
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Date: 1/30/2024 11:44:00 AM
My dear friend Sotto.. poem serves as a testament to the enduring power of music to bridge divides, mend broken spirits, and inspire hope in the face of adversity. Through its evocative imagery and impassioned plea for harmony, the poet invites readers to join in the collective pursuit of a world where peace reigns supreme and humanity's spirit thrives in unity and compassion..
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Date: 1/30/2024 9:53:00 AM
Nice poem with inspiring messages.
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