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Communication

Can't imagine a world without you, One where the simple touch Means nothing. Messages of the heart ignored. Unheard by the one who Needs to hear it most. Ignorance is not bliss, Considering, human pride All too often leaves Things of importance unsaid; Ignoring instinct and emotion. Override turtle tendency; Never wait to say, "I Love You!" jsc 2004

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Paul Schneiter

Date: 3/22/2015 10:54:00 PM

Janet, the last line eloquently sums up all the precedes it. Your poem addresses truth, and does so with a sweet, gentle touch. Nice!

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 3/23/2015 2:37:00 PM

Thanks for reading Paul. =)

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/10/2015 8:46:00 PM

The allure of your words was like being offered a cold lemon aid from the local stand set up by the neighbor kids, refreshing with a sweet after taste. Emile. #7

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 3/11/2015 4:54:00 PM

Lemonade? So now I'm a bit tart too?? LOL. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the rating. PS I love lemonade stands from the neighbor kids. It should be a part of everyone's childhood. ;)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/10/2015 5:23:00 PM

wise words indeed Janet for some day it may be too late :-( great acrostic:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 3/10/2015 5:34:00 PM

Thanks Jan. I am slowly pulling old work out and adding it to my collection here.