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When words flow freely Emotions released in air Love and peace prevail

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/14/2014 11:21:00 AM
Yes,both prevail.
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Jasonpoet Boyd
Date: 10/15/2014 7:51:00 PM
Imagine if everyone on earth had true love for others. There would be no war or famine or crime. No evil of any kind.
Date: 10/13/2014 10:45:00 PM
A nice 5,7,5 poem Bobb! ;) syllable counting can be a pain at times if not carefully scanning them in other poetry forms. I like the simplicity of this short one. Cheers! xxx D.
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Jasonpoet Boyd
Date: 10/14/2014 6:19:00 AM
Thank you I really didn't get it until willow helped me understand how it is done. She is good at it. Thank you for your comment and I am very happy that you liked it
Date: 10/13/2014 5:41:00 PM
Good for you, stepping out of the box!
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Jasonpoet Boyd
Date: 10/14/2014 6:17:00 AM
Ecouragement from special people gets me going every time. Thank you
Date: 10/13/2014 5:16:00 PM
Bobb, love this write :) eve
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Jasonpoet Boyd
Date: 10/13/2014 5:38:00 PM
Hi its me again I found out its 5 and 7 and 5 syllables and went back and fixed it lol
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Jasonpoet Boyd
Date: 10/13/2014 5:32:00 PM
Thank you Eve I still have not got the hang of haikus yet. maybe the next one will have the right amount of syllables LOL

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