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Bob Quigley,….Voices…. great poem, the motivation, the despair that rides the mood, the sadness, awful sadness , till the mind gets maybe stewed:( Tony L imagination says it all, a bull without the taste of gall? what does we have, whats really here, long horned poncing patio steer:) chuckle... agape moses, Freds dread so it moved him off camp, like a bull camel with the guts ache cramp, a purge quite enterprising, just short of re-alising...:) decamped... Linda, ooh and there he stood in a jealous rage, chomping on his toenails stage, so we turn another page, and time has made it right:) old age....delight...might...assuage. Don

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Cory Long

Date: 8/22/2011 9:01:00 AM

this was an awesome poem!!! good job.. cory

Tony Lane

Date: 8/22/2011 7:55:00 AM

Don, You kill me. Thanks, Tony

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/22/2011 3:05:00 AM

enjoyed the way you described some of our soup friends here with your charming wit, don... touche!..:) huggs, nette

Don Johnson
Date: 8/22/2011 5:08:00 AM

hope love is sweet, and life is good, that happiness is yours, as it should, perhaps one day you'll come way south, back to Aussie, welcome mat out...