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Committted Forever

Praise the Lord - I hope He'll bless And change my awful thought process Think cusswords and ready to fight Almost like a stick of dynamite!

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Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/9/2009 5:51:00 PM

This is a write that many will be able to relate with. We are all prey to the frailness of our humanity and all we can do is strive to be better people by following God's word...powerful and thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read and comment on my works~Mary

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/4/2009 10:05:00 PM

We have all been there and still working at the same struggles u express in this poem... but we just keep singing His praises.. remember Bible says.. out of the same mouth that praises come curses should not.. so we keep trying... sometimes its more difficult to control it.. but we can do all things through Christ who strengthens us... very good honest words from your creative pen, Joshua.. blessings... luv... Linda-Marie "Sweetheat" of Poetry Soup

P Sheart

Date: 12/4/2009 12:20:00 PM

Hi Josh, Very intuitive. I love the honesty in your words, very real. I think because you already realize you are concious of this behavior he wants you to replace every negative thought with a positive one. Thanks for your welcome comment, smile. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Happy holidays to you! Love Light Truth Patty