Committed

here we were  
the both of us
standing here
in front of the altar
getting ready to commit
to one another
can't turn back now
it all just begun
you said your vows
and i said mine
you put the ring 
on my finger
and i knew from
that moment we
became one
we promised to love
each other to death
do us part
the love we had for
each other before
couldn't compare to 
the love we have now
we are now connected
in more ways than before
our heart beats will
become one,our minds
body and soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 13, 2009 at 10:28 AM
Thank you for sharing your splendid poetry with us today Doresa. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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