Commitment

Commitment
 
If a rose stands for love
Then I present you this bouquet
To express my inner feelings
In the deepest kind of way

If a kiss seals the deal
Let us simply embrace
Make a commitment forever
Letting nothing go to waste 

If a ring said your mine
Let me place it on your finger
A promise from my heart
That I will never linger

If a word tells it all
Then simply say “I do”
And I’ll stay by your side
Until life is through
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 17, 2011 at 1:42 PM
Jeff you write some beautiful romantic poetry, this i can tell comes from your heart to the one you love so tenerly. a great piece of work. you do have a gift for this.
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