Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

Commiserations

vacuum of soul mate’s bereavement 
falling into a bottomless abyss
cannot be instantly healed 
by a mere platonic kiss

helpless yet rebellious
the wounded heart bleeds
yet tender touch of a friend
pained soul at such time needs

love, spontaneous and uninhibited 
plunges headlong into embrace
there is in it no calculation
and of ego no trace 

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Jan Allison September 17, 2023 at 9:27 AM Such a compassionate piece US, I know from first hand experience that many shy away from actually mentioning the deceased one for fear of upsetting those left behind, a hug, a kind word really can make all the difference:-) hugs Jan xx Unseeking Seeker September 17, 2023 at 9:10 PM Yes, I’ve discovered likewise, as you say.