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All the poor workers have to
stand side by side with their
wrists in such a lot of terror 
and agony due to diverticulitis.
At night are in constant pain.
Danger is all around them.
Death comes unexpectedly.
Heaven gets fuller each day.
God has to be watching us.
God saved us from agony and sin.
He cared for us when needed.
Bring us good news again.

Amen
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Theraven Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 10:31 AM
Jim, I watch for good news and your poem reminds of the cost in these days. The promise of Easter remains. -Richard
Horn Avatar
April 23, 2020 at 11:31 AM
V seems so depressing. Gives you a guilty conscience and makes you wonder just how responsible you are regarding all of this. Senator Warren's older brother died at 86 of the virus. This whole thing is really bothersome.
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