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Hello...Hello! Hello, brothers and sisters I'm from new chamber -With new medicine for you Who stand far from me Please come closer...... Sleepless night, Bad habit Laugh at me No problem! We have remedied Use and fall in love with sleep. Home is an annoyance, Babies are nagging, The wife is a tension, Time stops to walk, Dreams forget to come in your dreams! Take our advice....you will find His family. Youth escaped early Empty crown on the head, White Hair On My Beard, All day tension! Just change your vision, our top, and free medicine!

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/12/2013 5:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Very nice work, Litan!

Joseph May

Date: 11/11/2013 6:39:00 PM

congrats on your win Litan

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/11/2013 4:18:00 AM

Congratulations on the win, Litan

Skat A

Date: 11/10/2013 9:25:00 PM

Litan... Congratulations, thanks for the support..... ~SKAT~ LOVE

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 10/30/2013 6:33:00 AM

strong pen Litan and very true enjoyed this Ty for visiting my work Shadow x smile

Donna Jones

Date: 10/24/2013 9:13:00 AM

Enjoyed this....great wisdom along with the message..time doesn't stop. Things change..as we must...and be happy with what life deals us...or try.....:-) :-) :-)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/23/2013 5:23:00 PM

I wish it were so easy to change our ways! Sometimes, the only thing we need is a good friend. Who can cheer us up, and make everything better, again. A great poem, with a great message. Well done, Litan!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/23/2013 12:01:00 PM

- Litan, all the best to you my friend! - You o.k? - oxox // Anne-Lise :))

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/23/2013 3:03:00 AM

i was hooked tille i found the elixir at the endm litan.. yes, change your perspective and all will be well... a gem of a positive write!..:) huggs

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 10/19/2013 7:54:00 PM

bloody I thought you are writing something about Christ! Your medicine a great write.great message! (:v Jenish.

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/17/2013 9:07:00 AM

amazing message here Litan,, like your poetry....

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/14/2013 12:09:00 PM

rightly so, litan...when we change our attitude, we flow with the moment.. greeat write!..:) huggs

Len Gasun

Date: 10/10/2013 8:20:00 AM

This is absolutely awesome poem my dear friend Litan. I love it and so enjoyed reading it this evening! thanks for sharing and the smiles!:)))))) Have a great day! love lots and hugs, Leonora

Litan Dey
Date: 10/11/2013 12:45:00 PM

It's happy to have your comments.Thanks alot

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/10/2013 5:53:00 AM

Very nice remedy here Dr. Dey...I like your sense of humor, especially the bald head and white beard reference...Funny yet very sound advice! - Tim

Litan Dey
Date: 10/11/2013 12:42:00 PM

Ha ha! Thank you Tim...Have a good day

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/9/2013 4:41:00 PM

I cannot sleep at night and am tired during the day but I can't take medicine for either problem...sometimes I wish it were as easy as a magic pill....nice write....hugs :)

Litan Dey
Date: 10/9/2013 9:13:00 PM

Sleepless night is more botheration than hard work.Thanks for your sweet comment

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/7/2013 5:42:00 PM

ah, sweet sleep. how I miss it. I go to find it and I just can't find it anymore!

Litan Dey
Date: 10/8/2013 12:09:00 PM

Oh...i see.This is now the problems of maximum.My medicine is for those who don't want to sleep.You are different...want but can't.Thanks for sweet visit dear

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/7/2013 12:12:00 PM

- Terrible not getting sleep at night ....... I often do not sleep .... counting hours and minutes .... then rings the alarm clock .............. lol. - Thanks for the nice poem Litan! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Litan Dey
Date: 10/7/2013 12:14:00 PM

Then take my drug....i'm sure it will work.Thanks