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Hello...Hello!
Hello, brothers and sisters
I'm from new chamber
-With new medicine for you
Who stand far from me
Please come closer......
Sleepless night,
Bad habit
Laugh at me
No problem! We have remedied
Use and fall in love with sleep.
Home is an annoyance,
Babies are nagging,
The wife is a tension,
Time stops to walk,
Dreams forget to come in your dreams!
Take our advice....you will find His family.
Youth escaped early
Empty crown on the head,
White Hair On My Beard,
All day tension!
Just change your vision, our top, and free medicine!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Deschler Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 5:45 PM
Congratulations on your win! Very nice work, Litan!
May Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 6:39 PM
congrats on your win Litan
Mehta Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 4:18 AM
Congratulations on the win, Litan
A  Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 9:25 PM
Litan... Congratulations, thanks for the support..... ~SKAT~ LOVE
Hamilton Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 6:33 AM
strong pen Litan and very true enjoyed this Ty for visiting my work Shadow x smile
Jones Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 9:13 AM
Enjoyed this....great wisdom along with the message..time doesn't stop. Things change..as we must...and be happy with what life deals us...or try.....:-) :-) :-)
Deschler Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 5:23 PM
I wish it were so easy to change our ways! Sometimes, the only thing we need is a good friend. Who can cheer us up, and make everything better, again. A great poem, with a great message. Well done, Litan!
Andresen Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 12:01 PM
- Litan, all the best to you my friend! - You o.k? - oxox // Anne-Lise :))
Onclaud Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 3:03 AM
i was hooked tille i found the elixir at the endm litan.. yes, change your perspective and all will be well... a gem of a positive write!..:) huggs
Undertaker Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 7:54 PM
bloody I thought you are writing something about Christ! Your medicine a great write.great message! (:v Jenish.
Horsman Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 9:07 AM
amazing message here Litan,, like your poetry....
Onclaud Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 12:09 PM
rightly so, litan...when we change our attitude, we flow with the moment.. greeat write!..:) huggs
Gasun Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 8:20 AM
This is absolutely awesome poem my dear friend Litan. I love it and so enjoyed reading it this evening! thanks for sharing and the smiles!:)))))) Have a great day! love lots and hugs, Leonora
Dey Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 12:45 PM
It's happy to have your comments.Thanks alot
Ryerson Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 5:53 AM
Very nice remedy here Dr. Dey...I like your sense of humor, especially the bald head and white beard reference...Funny yet very sound advice! - Tim
Dey Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 12:42 PM
Ha ha! Thank you Tim...Have a good day
Adams Avatar
October 9, 2013 at 4:41 PM
I cannot sleep at night and am tired during the day but I can't take medicine for either problem...sometimes I wish it were as easy as a magic pill....nice write....hugs :)
Dey Avatar
October 9, 2013 at 9:13 PM
Sleepless night is more botheration than hard work.Thanks for your sweet comment
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 5:42 PM
ah, sweet sleep. how I miss it. I go to find it and I just can't find it anymore!
Dey Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 12:09 PM
Oh...i see.This is now the problems of maximum.My medicine is for those who don't want to sleep.You are different...want but can't.Thanks for sweet visit dear
Andresen Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 12:12 PM
- Terrible not getting sleep at night ....... I often do not sleep .... counting hours and minutes .... then rings the alarm clock .............. lol. - Thanks for the nice poem Litan! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Dey Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 12:14 PM
Then take my drug....i'm sure it will work.Thanks
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