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COMING SOON We are far away Your night coincides with my day. Here dawn starts Me busy in work without delay Your Sun departs May evening breeze sway. Night may put you in disturbed sleep. In desired dream you sink and slip. Me engaged in working place, remembering your sweet face. . At your midnight I am facing noon, yet coming soon. Hope to greet you Dear with deep kiss, my best bliss Sweetheart, unison is near. 06/15/21 Re-edited on 08/17/21 First Place 'A Brian Strand 2 to 14 lines 'Contest by Brian Strand 1

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Date: 8/17/2021 7:09:00 PM
Beautiful Verse. Congratulations on your Win!
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Date: 8/17/2021 10:35:00 AM
Anisha,a prize winner+ in my contest 1031
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Date: 6/26/2021 2:49:00 PM
Anisha, this was creative and well thought out! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 6/24/2021 5:53:00 PM
sure like this one. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/15/2021 10:05:00 AM
Good one!
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 6/15/2021 10:18:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 6/15/2021 9:35:00 AM
Nice one, Anisha!
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 6/15/2021 10:19:00 AM
Thanks

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