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Coming of Age

COMING OF AGE I wish I could go back. Back to the kickball games, The sidewalk chalk drawings, And playing until the street lights came on. I wish I could go back. Back to when my biggest worry in the world, was if I was going to get to play outside after school. When my biggest problem was school because I couldn’t figure out how to write in cursive. I wish I could go back. Because now I’m to old for kickball, the sidewalks are just for walking, and no one has time to play outside anymore. I wish I could go back. Because now my biggest worries are college and how I am going to pay my bills. School just seems never ending and every day in every class seems impossible.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/20/2016 5:01:00 PM
excellent poem...... congrats on being featured.....
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Date: 12/20/2016 3:51:00 PM
Brianna, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) HAPPY HOLIDAYS. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/14/2016 9:49:00 AM
One day at a time, Brianna. Growing up sucks! Nice write:)
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