Coming of Age

Coming of age

Being a kid was awesome
Not worrying about bills,
or saving for a car
All you wanted to do was grow up
Now look,
everyone wants to go back,
be young again
Not worrying about bills,
or saving up for a car
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December 20, 2014 at 4:30 PM
KEVIN, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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December 11, 2014 at 5:29 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Kevin - I choose your first well written free verse - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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