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Coming Home To You

I see the gates in front of me, The flowered fields that sway My eyes have started searching for, The pieces of my heart that were taken away.

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Diane Christian

Date: 4/10/2024 3:11:00 AM

I like this poem, I imagine the gates to be heavenly with a beautiful meadow. I lost my father 23 hours after giving birth 28 years this august but am always imagine him waiting for me at the gates. A lovely poem you wrote.

Beata Agustin

Date: 4/3/2024 12:12:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.