Mystic Rose Rose Poet Verse

Coming Home

The sun will shine brighter tomorrow when 
you come into your own 
the trees will shade you better then 
when you take a walk with thee 

The moon will wait at your doorstep's array 
and help you recognise your light 
it will no longer petrify you, the night  
when you finally come home . 

June 21, 2018
for the poems of poems contest

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Susan Gentry July 3, 2018 at 8:37 PM Omg. Pixie! This is just beautiful and thoughtful, well written. Congratulations on your win.

Vijay Pandit July 3, 2018 at 7:29 AM Congrats Pixie on your well deserved win--happy to see you at the podium.

Charles Messina July 3, 2018 at 6:08 AM Hi Pixie, thank you for entering in my contest with this beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win and for being part of this...God Bless...Charlie

Gershon Wolf June 25, 2018 at 7:18 PM Love how those last two lines work, P.D. Very nice! ~ Gershon

Josh Heree June 22, 2018 at 8:35 AM nice pixie it's beautiful and comforting.

Lyric Man June 22, 2018 at 7:40 AM Pixie.. this is a. Ontest winner for sure. Your style and flow are perfect!

Casarah Nance June 21, 2018 at 6:52 PM nice I can feel the welcoming

James Marshall Goff June 21, 2018 at 6:49 PM Nice, PD...invisible life forces of the universe....feng shui...unique work

Robertina B. June 21, 2018 at 6:18 PM So beautiful and comforting, Pixie.. I have been uplifted..Enjoyed your verse tremendously! Many Blessings..

Vijay Pandit June 21, 2018 at 6:06 PM Reassuring words of comfort..well done Pixie..best for a win.