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The sun will shine brighter tomorrow when you come into your own the trees will shade you better then when you take a walk with thee The moon will wait at your doorstep's array and help you recognise your light it will no longer petrify you, the night when you finally come home . June 21, 2018 for the poems of poems contest

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Date: 7/3/2018 8:37:00 PM
Omg. Pixie! This is just beautiful and thoughtful, well written. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/3/2018 7:29:00 AM
Congrats Pixie on your well deserved win--happy to see you at the podium.
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Date: 7/3/2018 6:08:00 AM
Hi Pixie, thank you for entering in my contest with this beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win and for being part of this...God Bless...Charlie
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Date: 6/25/2018 7:18:00 PM
Love how those last two lines work, P.D. Very nice! ~ Gershon
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Date: 6/22/2018 8:35:00 AM
nice pixie it's beautiful and comforting.
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Date: 6/22/2018 7:40:00 AM
Pixie.. this is a. Ontest winner for sure. Your style and flow are perfect!
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:52:00 PM
nice I can feel the welcoming
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:49:00 PM
Nice, PD...invisible life forces of the universe....feng shui...unique work
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:18:00 PM
So beautiful and comforting, Pixie.. I have been uplifted..Enjoyed your verse tremendously! Many Blessings..
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:06:00 PM
Reassuring words of comfort..well done Pixie..best for a win.
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