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In spite of a deep mental sorrow,
her desire for soothing music ~ once moving
a need to resolve, find closure, for her morrow
  ending ~ child morning her mothers passing

     Mesmerized by her gaze, thinking
  a moment in time, when time passed
 renewing insights, Moms words, thoughts
visualized ~ rearranged Notes, when pleased,

Resuming, struggling for some long lost tune
suddenly made her cheeks blush,
with smooth rhythm, her song now fine-tune
bow drawn, sounds elusive ~ she wouldn't rush

      Blossoming rose ~ her keen ear
    gentle, her face filled a pinkish red,
 sounds of music ~ finally filled thee air
perhaps heightened her beauty instead

     She magically played Oh so soothing,
to one's ear, while slowly, then faster, faster
coming back, so confident, she wept trying
    bowing her sweet violin absorbed her

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