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Comforting Thoughts

At the top of the stairs in the room to the left, She lay on her bed breathing her last. Where was her mind at, what was she thinking, Had she drifted away, back to her past. Was she with her dearest, who'd gone years before The love of her life, she'd never stopped crying. Was she in his arms as she faded away, Such comforting thoughts, as she lay there dying. And when it came, that dimming of life Upon her face, did I see a glow? I thought she smiled as she left this world, Had her beloved one, just said hello. Entry for Hello Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent One. 15/1/19. Placed 3rd.

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Date: 1/20/2019 1:29:00 PM
- Hello, Gary :) - Congratulations on your winning poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/20/2019 2:00:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. :)
Date: 1/20/2019 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Gary, on Silent One's "Hello" contest! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/20/2019 1:25:00 PM
Thank you Eve. :)
Date: 1/20/2019 7:17:00 AM
BEautiful words Gary.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/20/2019 7:20:00 AM
Thank you Silent One. :)
Date: 1/17/2019 11:10:00 AM
They do often say, "Hello"; good luck in the contest.
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/17/2019 11:22:00 AM
Thank you M.L. :)
Date: 1/15/2019 12:54:00 PM
goodbye and hello at the same time! Great take on the contest! :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/15/2019 1:27:00 PM
Thank you P.S. :)
Date: 1/15/2019 12:24:00 PM
Great one for the contest Gary :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/15/2019 1:27:00 PM
Thank you Heidi. :)

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