Comfortable Silence

no conversation
we already understand
lay down beside me…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Jordan Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 9:19 AM
Beautifully done! Your use of senryu prompted me to find a definition. What I've been writing is more senryu than haiku. Thanks... Jack
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 6:29 AM
this is really nice, Tim! Great title for it.
Haick Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 11:16 PM
Beautiful Senryu, Tim. Two hearts in sync, words are so not necessary! Love this! Annalise
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