Comfortable Arrows

Comfortable Arrows

Lay down my friend,
lay upon a muddy pillow,

Such relief 
after a hard day
playing in battle 
and in fear.

Take off a limb 
or two, 
and slip into 
something gauze,

Swathes of 
poppy red fields,
crisp and clean 
will embrace you.

Perhaps a little claret,
sticky, 
a good nose 
but not too old,

Warm, 
trickling 
and soothing,

Vintage, 
with a bouquet 
of iron,

Barbed, 
with a lingering finish,

Perfect with a cigar,

Hand rolled 
leaves of skin,

Toasted, 
flakey, 
rubbed 
and lit....

Inhale, 
inhale 
through silver holes,

Where sparkling bullets 
still ricochet, 

Still smoking.....

Breath, 
pause, 
breathe, 
pause,
pause.....

Turn down 
the exploding lights,

It's only a game,

Those blazing fires 
of the cannons
are far too bright 
for our little lot,
for us to be brave, 

To relax, 
to die.

Perhaps 
a little music will help,

A bugle, 
a boom, 
a cry, 
a boom,
a whistle, 
a shout, 
a bugle, 
a boom,

Like the rythmn 
of a drum,
of a heart, 
or a love song.

Close your eyes,
there's nothing more 
to see,

To live for, 

To feel......

It's all in your 
imagination.

You will not 
hurt anymore
when dying is like 
being executed 
by smiling friends 
with childish bows
and comfortable arrows.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Arts Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 6:37 PM
I was pulled into the scene, Nice.
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December 10, 2015 at 5:36 PM
Such an enjoyable deep write, Robert.
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