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Comfort Zone

A feeling that gets me feeling the greatest flipping through songs that make me feel like I'm going to make it I can sit back, chill & relate with The sun goes up & the moon goes down I know I have not yet reached the rooftops every day, but I'm sure not Touching the ground. Have much to believe in, but do I believe it or not? My mind keeps racing while my face is stuck Then my eyes close shut Zoning in & out of conscious Deep thoughts on how I was born into the sickness of the world Will I sit back & die from it or live past it? I'm feeling it The high I get from life That grew into my life Feeling like everything is alright If I die tonight, my soul will be already dancing around the starlights I had a cruel summer, but I'm going to enjoy my chill winter nights Reaching new heights The comfort is just right My mind is in the clouds My body has slowed down I Lay gently into a dream & in my dream, I never wake up from my dream Lost in it all The sky, the galaxy & everything in-between -In my zone

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Date: 7/21/2013 8:31:00 PM
Hi Malcome, :-) your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"...... Hugs* SKAT"
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Malcolm Brooks
Date: 7/22/2013 1:20:00 PM
Thank You, I Really Appreciate it :)

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