Comes and Goes

in storm of silence
beating wings left nest in spring
will return heart asks? sighs yes

dawn splendor in sky
daffodils dancing in breeze
is it your footstep? maybe



Katuata-Haiku
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Balasubramanian Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 10:00 PM
Good one it is beautiful. You made the same mistake I did capital in title. Titles should be lowercase too. Thanks for brightening my Potd with your wonderful comments
Schiavina Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 8:24 AM
Since the poem is normally untitled, titles shouldn't count. Thank you! Your correction is greatly appreciate it.
Sands Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 4:33 PM
Beautiful Haiku! I enjoyed :)
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