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Comes a time when the strength is not to fight and forgiveness not for saints and martyrs, when the soil grown sour and the vine in blight reap the fruit of the Sins of the Fathers! Comes a breath that enters but does not leave when all that remains is a beggar’s pride, it’s then he that gives will richly receive and he that stumbles will suffer His chide. Comes a reckoning the bells do carry - a great heralding too loud to ignore, for in its virtue not wont to tarry it tolls for the man of steel, not of straw. Comes a peace when all steadfastness is done and all is right between Father and Son. Written: October 2007

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Date: 3/13/2023 8:31:00 PM
he that stumbles will suffer His chide... that's the kind of line that distinguishes the difference between a writer and a Poet. You are a poet. I've cheated myself by not reading you for years.
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