Come Winter

A subtle tingle; an inaudible shudder trembles in the pines


For: Broken Wing’s Monoku contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Adams Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 8:11 PM
you paint such a magical picture...one can see, hear, feel this one...nicely penned! :)
Collins Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 8:42 AM
Dear Tim - I know I've read this masterful piece before. I am there in the forest with snow dropped onto my head. love, Kathy
Melugin Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 10:41 AM
Tim, You...one lined the ushering in of the season!! You poet you! in respect, chuck
Guzzi Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 4:36 PM
Yup yup you did it just [shhh no ; use --]Light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 6:58 AM
sanamagan, tim... this is breathtakingly mysterious and excellent in imagery... bow!..:) huggs
Michelle Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 7:14 PM
Lovely write. Thank you for your kind comments on my latest poem, though I know it's been awhile since I've been online. You are very kind, I enjoy your poetry. Love, Juli-Michelle
Dunn Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 5:45 PM
By the way I wanted to tell you the 1967 Bonnie and Clyde is the best EVER movie made on the subject i'm a huge fan on that movie also cheri
Dunn Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 5:27 PM
A well written line, sounded great but to be honest it left me wanting for more. cheri and thank you for your comments on my writes
Mehta Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 9:37 PM
Fantastic flight, Tim
Guzzi Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 4:45 PM
A stark image! a bit scary too. Thanks so much for stopping by, reading and commenting on my verse. Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 3:40 PM
wow, I would love one like this if it were MY contest!!!!
Chircop Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 3:17 PM
An excellent monoku Tim.Glad im.back on the soup reading you.
Andresen Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 2:29 PM
- Very good, Tim - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Horne Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 2:25 PM
wow, I love this one, Tim
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