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Come sit awhile with me
Love is a serenade of the soul
a harmony that never grows old.Quote ~ poets own
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Won't you come and sit awhile with me
here beneath the weeping willow tree
Take a rest and let your mind be free
of pain, distress and anxiety.

The willow weeps to see true love part
and is a shelter for broken hearts
A safe haven of serenity
to restore shattered tranquility.

Come listen and hear the sweet birdsong
release the hurt you've felt for so long
Tears will help heal the sorrow and pain
allowing your heart to sing again.

One day it won't ever sting at all
only the tenderness you'll recall
For nothing is lovelier, it's true
than a love that meant so much to you.

Treasure the first whispered "I Love You"
Keep it near and dear, forever do
The melody of love's sweet refrain
worn like a beautiful golden chain.

If only shared kisses could be kept
they would overfill a treasure chest
Every one a precious diamond gem
part of the love that they represent.

Memories are truly heaven blessed
moments far too precious to forget 
Warming one's heart in so many ways
in beautiful dreams of yesterdays.
19th January 2021
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Completely Your Choice (46) any theme any form Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/12/2022 4:31:00 PM

Hello Belle, you out did yourself with this poem. Hugs. Darlene

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 2/19/2021 2:59:00 AM

Another outstanding write Belle. Saw this in top 100 poem list. If we would note down all positive happenings of day in dairy, it would make a wonderful read later in life. Thanks for the inspiration. Have a great day ahead. Take care Rama

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/19/2021 12:36:00 PM

Thank you Rama, if only we’d written down all the best times of our lives, still we have a memory which keeps them alive in our minds. You have a good day too, bless you ~ Belle

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/23/2021 4:01:00 AM

Back with congrats. Sara

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/23/2021 5:31:00 PM

Thank you Sara, most appreciated... Belle

Daisy Ward

Date: 1/21/2021 11:36:00 AM

THIS POEM IS SO BEAUTIFUL IT BRING TEARS TO MY EYES. TIMES MOVES QUICKLY

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/21/2021 12:00:00 PM

Time flies it certainly does, make the most of each day from now on, for soon comes the day we wonder where the years have gone. Thank you Daisy... Belle

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/21/2021 1:13:00 AM

Memories of so long ago are so precious to us, moments in your life that you want to last forever fade away and you wonder where did time go. Well written Belle. Tom

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/21/2021 2:28:00 AM

Thank you Tom! - Memories of purest gold sadly fade away as the years unfold... Belle

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/20/2021 10:38:00 PM

Love the request, and the poetry, the rhyme and flow is superb...love it..

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/21/2021 12:54:00 AM

Thank you Harry, nice of you I’m very grateful... Belle

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/20/2021 3:07:00 PM

Hi Belle, This is a great entry for the contest. I found it to be very romantic as well. Congratulations on your winning write. It has was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/20/2021 3:11:00 PM

Thank you Alexis, I truly appreciate your comments. Have a good rest of the day... Belle :-)

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/20/2021 11:11:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful, Belle. Congrats on your well deserved top win ~

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/20/2021 11:29:00 AM

Thank you so much for that Line, the win has certainly given me a boost - as like most people on Earth these days of keeping our distance have been difficult to cope with.... Belle

Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/20/2021 10:56:00 AM

Wow! You won first prize before I had the opportunity to read this! Well done! Aloha! Rico

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/20/2021 11:21:00 AM

I was very surprised with getting first prize as the poem was only posted on site yesterday, a delightful surprise I must add. Thank you Rico ~ Belle

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/20/2021 10:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. I am under your willow tree hearing your birds singing. Enjoy your win/day with blessings..................

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/20/2021 11:22:00 AM

Ah, thank you so much Paula, you enjoy a blessed day too... Belle

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/20/2021 10:01:00 AM

A lovely and very romantic poem, Belle. Congratulations on your first place win. Blessings to you!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/20/2021 10:12:00 AM

Thank you Sam, I didn’t know the contest had been judged, what a wonderful surprise... Belle

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/20/2021 6:05:00 AM

A beautiful, enchanting blessing to partake of.. your pen meets the page with grace and penetrating light... God bless you with more insights

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/20/2021 3:59:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sad to see the loss of memory that happens in the elderly. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/19/2021 7:56:00 PM

This is so enchanting and tranquil, Belle. It's going straight into my FAVES... Just a thought: Do you ever enter poems like this in Brian Strand's 'Completely Your Choice' contests? I think that this poem, for example, would rate a podium win, possibly even the 1st place podium finish. ~ Just sayin' Write on! :) Gershon

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/20/2021 1:29:00 AM

Thank you Gershon, I really appreciate your comments. I will look out for a contest of Brian Strand’s that this poem may be suitable for... Keep writing! Belle :-)