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Come Sail Away

~~~ The pitch o' night her captain feared her leeward pending doom November's raging breath ensnared to daunting reef she loomed Her belly shattered pitched and gorged as raging swells reclaim The drift of break flew blizzard cold ~ Come Sail Away... her name ~

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Date: 7/7/2017 1:39:00 PM
Nautical Nirvana, with a twist of the darkside Rex. . . Love it!
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Date: 12/11/2016 8:24:00 PM
I really love this one, how rhythmical it is and how you ended it. Awesome little poem
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Date: 12/11/2016 4:43:00 PM
So deep...
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Rex McCoy
Date: 12/11/2016 5:51:00 PM
Thankyou for reading... it does promote a little thought
Date: 12/11/2016 2:46:00 PM
Nice, flows so easily yet inspires an image well.
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Rex McCoy
Date: 12/11/2016 5:49:00 PM
Thankyou... not being a sailor myself, I had to research their jargon to best get my idea across. I saw a sailboat a couple years ago caught on a reef during a wind storm. The people made it off safely but the hull of the boat was battered and broken from the waves... decided it would make an interesting poem.
Date: 12/11/2016 2:24:00 PM
Very lovely...
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Rex McCoy
Date: 12/11/2016 5:40:00 PM
Thankyou... glad you enjoyed