Come Run With Me

Come run with me down to the sea
  Hand in hand, just you and me

Down
  Down
    Down
       Down to the sea 
  Where I will be your devotee


Come skip with me along the shore
  Rejoicing hearts, forevermore

Skip
  Skip
    Skip along the shore
  And I will be your troubadour


Come fly with me o'er timeless sands
  Glisten waters, faraway lands

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Date: 7/30/2021 12:42:00 PM
WoW! Gershon, This is so romantic. I loved every line. Good content and imagery:-) Alexis
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/30/2021 2:25:00 PM
Thank you for such a lovely comment, Alexis. Happy Weekend! ~ Gershon
Date: 7/30/2021 7:18:00 AM
Oh, I love it. I felt like I just ran away with this :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/30/2021 9:11:00 AM
Heidi, please feel free to run and skip, all the way down to the sea. Happy Weekend, gw
Date: 7/29/2021 9:57:00 PM
Vision, rhyme, emotion, time, execution---down, down, down to the great unknown! So cleverly done Gershon!!...ab
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/30/2021 8:59:00 AM
Thanks for telling me how you feel about this one, Anselmo. Delighted that you like it! Happy weekend, Gershon
Date: 7/29/2021 8:04:00 PM
I like the way this is written, and especially the way it is typed, it feels like you are skipping down to the sea.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/30/2021 8:59:00 AM
Just call me 'Skippy.' ... When I reach the sea, you can call me 'Skipper!' ~ Flipper
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