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Come Run With Me

Come run with me down to the sea Hand in hand, just you and me Down Down Down Down to the sea Where I will be your devotee Come skip with me along the shore Rejoicing hearts, forevermore Skip Skip Skip along the shore And I will be your troubadour Come fly with me o'er timeless sands Glisten waters, faraway lands

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Alexis Y.

Date: 7/30/2021 12:42:00 PM

WoW! Gershon, This is so romantic. I loved every line. Good content and imagery:-) Alexis

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/30/2021 2:25:00 PM

Thank you for such a lovely comment, Alexis. Happy Weekend! ~ Gershon

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/30/2021 7:18:00 AM

Oh, I love it. I felt like I just ran away with this :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/30/2021 9:11:00 AM

Heidi, please feel free to run and skip, all the way down to the sea. Happy Weekend, gw

Anselmo Boles

Date: 7/29/2021 9:57:00 PM

Vision, rhyme, emotion, time, execution---down, down, down to the great unknown! So cleverly done Gershon!!...ab

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/30/2021 8:59:00 AM

Thanks for telling me how you feel about this one, Anselmo. Delighted that you like it! Happy weekend, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/29/2021 8:04:00 PM

I like the way this is written, and especially the way it is typed, it feels like you are skipping down to the sea.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/30/2021 8:59:00 AM

Just call me 'Skippy.' ... When I reach the sea, you can call me 'Skipper!' ~ Flipper