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Come Reap

pregnant harvest moon penetrating horizon, birthing morning sun *For Raul's Nature's Best Haiku Contest :)

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Joanna Smith

Date: 2/18/2010 12:47:00 PM

this is very beautiful and i loved how you described it as the moon birthing the sun, it was great and i have not ever looked at it that way, usually i think that the sun births the moon but i like it your way better! =)Jo

Denis Joe

Date: 5/17/2009 6:21:00 AM

Now this is haiku! I think that it captures everything that a poem should do. There is no pretentions of sylable counting and flow. what haiku should be is three poems on the same theme from different perspective. I like that you westernise the form but maintain the discipline that is important in catching a moment and making it everlasting. Excellent!

Brian Strand

Date: 5/17/2009 12:28:00 AM

Best wishes with this one Kristin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/16/2009 1:11:00 PM

Thanks for supporting my contest Kristin...Raul

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/16/2009 9:08:00 AM

~lol~ about the pregnant comments! Such beauty you have painted. An incredible vision and more. Good luck! Like you need it : ). Love, Shar xoxo

P Sheart

Date: 5/16/2009 8:49:00 AM

Kristin Absolutey mesmerizing! Gets me all dreamy eyed!Love Stacey's comment I ditto her sentiments. Take care hun. Good luck in contest! It's a winner either way....Love it! Love Light Truth Patricia

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/16/2009 7:30:00 AM

This is incredible writing my friend...I want all of these lines for my poetry pocket....so well done..Raul, mark first place beside this one now!!..its a wrap!!

Jack Reed

Date: 5/16/2009 5:44:00 AM

What are we trying to grow here... what a great form... Jack...