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Come Here, My Dear, and Have No Fear

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Come Here, My Dear, And Have No Fear Come here my dear, and have no fear, -- listen to this tale of woe, Gates that never close is Hell, they weave concoctions evil spell, Pains of the tormented swell, for there's no cure or hope in Hell, Yet, by my side, as words flow, beget no fear my dear, you know, Tentacles of death, I dispel, from bizarre regions of Hell. My account of this dark chapter negates whole that is pleasure, For there is only trembling of this, fear hawks the soul its gist, Just take delightful leisure, a shed of hope, some small gesture, Nay, the darkness rise and in its midst, Hell's keys are in its fist, Hell's minion's all treasure, nay confidence, nor countermeasure, By and by, for here my dear, a fearless kiss and all dismissed. 2020 February 07 *1st Place* Rhyme Time 8 ~~Lu Loo 2.) Come here, my dear, and have no fear Rhyme Scheme; ABBAB-CDCDCD

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Date: 2/23/2020 10:47:00 AM
wow, those internal rhymes got me! I love that so much. Amazing poem dear William, please know this was one of my favorites. Thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. X:-)
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Date: 2/23/2020 1:01:00 PM
Wow, so well pleased with your usual sweet-talk, LuLoo, Thanks much for my placement, and again, -- Aloha!~@wk

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