Come Fly With Me (Reversed Verse)

High above the clouds
Across the midnight blue sky
Where winds soar freely 
~~
Where winds soar freely 
Across the midnight blue sky
High above the clouds
 




Authors Comments:
“The answers are blowing in the wind, sometimes we have to soar a little higher 
In order to reach the heights of listening”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Johnson Avatar
October 11, 2008 at 10:35 PM
Your well on your way to the style of HAIKU. #1 fan
White Avatar
September 23, 2008 at 4:43 PM
I love this write, we have to fly high above to get and receive the message, grat write and thanks for your comments, take care D-nyce
Buys Avatar
September 22, 2008 at 4:34 PM
So cleverly done and beautiful as well. Well done. Regards Heidie
Reynolds Avatar
September 22, 2008 at 3:47 AM
I could not agree more, all answers can be found in the winds that carry the song of all that is! One just has to know how to listen, excellent! Love Kristin
Anos Avatar
September 21, 2008 at 7:48 PM
Nice one.
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September 21, 2008 at 2:48 PM
This is so creative. Nice use of imagery. Amen to your post comment. What a wonderful use of this short format. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep up the good writing! Karen
Winter Avatar
September 21, 2008 at 11:54 AM
Breathtaking imagery both ways! Your comment adds so much. A beautiful write Adell. Love your reversed verses! Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
September 21, 2008 at 7:58 AM
This is a cool Haiku Adell - The comment is perfect for the poem and vice-versa - Wonderful Poetry - God Bless
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