Come Dawn, the Fun

Every day Time hits a home run
    the sun choreographs her daily run
  At night, comets and stars
    dart around like gleaming race cars

  ~ Come the dawn, a new round of fun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 7:49 PM
Wow! Love this! Great choreography, my friend!
Wolf Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 7:25 PM
I'll take a 'Wow' every day of the week. Thanks, Kim!
Hawkins Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 11:44 PM
Another world, I loved the imagery it brought to mind. Thank you, Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 6:57 PM
Appreciate the appreciation, Shirley. Here's to a great week!
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