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Come Dawn, the Fun

Every day Time hits a home run the sun choreographs her daily run At night, comets and stars dart around like gleaming race cars ~ Come the dawn, a new round of fun

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Date: 4/16/2023 7:49:00 PM
Wow! Love this! Great choreography, my friend!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/17/2023 7:25:00 PM
I'll take a 'Wow' every day of the week. Thanks, Kim!
Date: 4/15/2023 11:44:00 PM
Another world, I loved the imagery it brought to mind. Thank you, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/16/2023 6:57:00 PM
Appreciate the appreciation, Shirley. Here's to a great week!

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