Come Closer

Why look at me with disgust,
Come closer it's a must.
What do you see?
Open your eyes and really see.
Do you see a carbon copy of you?
We are connected but you have no clue.
Take the blinders off and look,
Do you see now? Just look.
We all apart of the human race,
There's no reason to look with disgrace.
We are connected you and me
Hate is toxic don't you agree?


Alexis Y.
11-3-18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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May Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 5:35 PM
That is way perfect, I couldn't of said it better!
Y. Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 5:38 PM
Hi Bobby, We are "all" connected. We all part of the human race. I appreciate you stopping by and leaving a kind comment:-) Alexis
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 9:46 PM
Yep, I agree wholeheartedly, Alexis. Very sharp and insightful this truthlove poem be. Excellent musing. Stellar bright poetry. Love and more love always.
Daniel Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 8:23 AM
Yeah, I agree, love spreads much easier:)
Pandit Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 8:56 AM
A loving, meaningful message.
Worthy Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Yup. I agree lol. Loved this one
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