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Come Closer

Why look at me with disgust, Come closer it's a must. What do you see? Open your eyes and really see. Do you see a carbon copy of you? We are connected but you have no clue. Take the blinders off and look, Do you see now? Just look. We all apart of the human race, There's no reason to look with disgrace. We are connected you and me Hate is toxic don't you agree? Alexis Y. 11-3-18

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Date: 12/18/2018 5:35:00 PM
That is way perfect, I couldn't of said it better!
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Date: 12/18/2018 5:38:00 PM
Hi Bobby, We are "all" connected. We all part of the human race. I appreciate you stopping by and leaving a kind comment:-) Alexis
Date: 11/21/2018 9:46:00 PM
Yep, I agree wholeheartedly, Alexis. Very sharp and insightful this truthlove poem be. Excellent musing. Stellar bright poetry. Love and more love always.
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Date: 11/9/2018 8:23:00 AM
Yeah, I agree, love spreads much easier:)
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Date: 11/4/2018 8:56:00 AM
A loving, meaningful message.
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Date: 11/4/2018 12:00:00 AM
Yup. I agree lol. Loved this one
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