Come Back To Me

Though your separation is transitory
It chokes my respiratory
My mind is perspicuous
Yet my heart is capricious
Behold me! help to gravitate me to this earth
As my soul is about to dissipate near the hearth
Why you left me in an alienate place
I can't get out of this love maze
Bear my words though they are inurbane
Consider them as sweet as cane
These are of no flatter or praise
But an endeavour for your feelings to raise
You can make me a scapegoat
But don't make me sail in a lonely boat
Don't be malignant
My love for you is magnificient

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/19/2016 12:11:00 PM
You wove the required words into a very deep poem Bala:-) hugs Jan xx
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Bala Naga Lakshmi
Date: 9/19/2016 12:15:00 PM
Thanks.
Date: 9/18/2016 5:53:00 AM
Well penned. Congrats! :)
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Bala Naga Lakshmi
Date: 9/19/2016 8:39:00 AM
Thanks for your comments
Date: 9/8/2016 12:19:00 PM
Very touching. Separation is so painful. I like your wordings; they are so rhymed. Hugs Sew
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Date: 9/8/2016 9:41:00 PM
Thanks for your valuable comments.
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