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Just a moment in viewing heaven..

Come Away My Love

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                                               Come away my love
                                    Harvest past, spring flowers bloom
                                            Pearl gates, jasper waits

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Kevin Clark

August 27, 2011 at 7:26 AM

Nice poem Sara.

Kash Poet

August 27, 2011 at 6:01 AM

wonderful poem here Sara.Enjoyed very much.

Robert A. Dufresne

August 26, 2011 at 10:57 AM

well isn't that a beautiful picture Sara ... and your lovely poem to match. Very pretty.

Nick Bagnall

August 26, 2011 at 8:16 AM

very pretty words to deal with such a sad context, nocely written.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 25, 2011 at 11:55 PM

luv those pearl gates Sara.. nice refreshing delightful words my friend.. raining like cats and dogs and horses..oh ..

Russell Sivey

August 25, 2011 at 11:16 PM

What a splendid write! Great and wonderful words you have written! I do enjoy this form as well!

Nette Onclaud

August 25, 2011 at 5:54 PM

such subtle passion abounds... is this for a contest, sara... winning's best! :) huggs, nette

Sheol Moribund

August 25, 2011 at 4:20 PM

Hi Sara: Great poem!!! Love the last line "pearl gates, jasper waits". Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. PEACE!

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 25, 2011 at 3:34 PM

Enjoyed reading your very interesting poetry today Sara. Love, Carol

James Foulk

August 25, 2011 at 1:45 PM

a very romantic poem. enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on the old class room. yes she was a great teacher. and thank you for all of your support. this will be my last time on soup, my internet will be gone the 27th and plus i have been having trouble with it everyday, it goes out, and sometimes i can't fix it. and we have a lot of packing before we move on sunday the 28th of Aug. so take care.

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