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Just a moment in viewing heaven..

Come Away My Love

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                                               Come away my love
                                    Harvest past, spring flowers bloom
                                            Pearl gates, jasper waits

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Kevin Clark Date: 8/27/2011 7:26:00 AM Nice poem Sara. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 8/27/2011 6:01:00 AM wonderful poem here Sara.Enjoyed very much. Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 8/26/2011 10:57:00 AM well isn't that a beautiful picture Sara ... and your lovely poem to match. Very pretty. Login to Reply

Nick Bagnall Date: 8/26/2011 8:16:00 AM very pretty words to deal with such a sad context, nocely written. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/25/2011 11:55:00 PM luv those pearl gates Sara.. nice refreshing delightful words my friend.. raining like cats and dogs and horses..oh .. Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 8/25/2011 11:16:00 PM What a splendid write! Great and wonderful words you have written! I do enjoy this form as well! Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/25/2011 5:54:00 PM such subtle passion abounds... is this for a contest, sara... winning's best! :) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Sheol Moribund Date: 8/25/2011 4:20:00 PM Hi Sara: Great poem!!! Love the last line "pearl gates, jasper waits". Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. PEACE! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/25/2011 3:34:00 PM Enjoyed reading your very interesting poetry today Sara. Love, Carol Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 8/25/2011 1:45:00 PM a very romantic poem. enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on the old class room. yes she was a great teacher. and thank you for all of your support. this will be my last time on soup, my internet will be gone the 27th and plus i have been having trouble with it everyday, it goes out, and sometimes i can't fix it. and we have a lot of packing before we move on sunday the 28th of Aug. so take care. Login to Reply