Notes About The Poem

Come

Now the golden rods blossom
And summer's birds have flown
There is a tinge 'pon leaves
"Come", before all warmth has gone

Here at the front door with a tap
Down where the golden rods sway
The easterly winds whisk gently
'Cause, "Come" he thought he heard me say

Well, now he sees a smile appear
A twinkle lights my green eyes
As he whispers, " I thought you said, come!"
And so come did I   
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Zerlaut Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 8:42 PM
This is really cute, Sara. great poem!
Kendrick Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 9:15 AM
Thanks for the kind review..I appreciate the time spent reading and taking time to comment..Sara
Apell Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 1:16 AM
Glowing lines, beautifully woven, Sara! I love it.
Horne Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 6:34 AM
this is beautiful, my friend x
Kendrick Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 5:07 PM
Thanks for dropping by, taking time to read and comment..I appreciate the kind review.Sara
P  Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 4:20 AM
A sweet whisper of a poem, like an autumn breeze, lovely.
Kendrick Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 5:40 AM
Sometimes a whisper is good especially when there has been furious winds around..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Alhemaidy Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 2:31 PM
Nice and clear lovely Sara :)
Kendrick Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 4:59 PM
Your presence at my work is uplifting..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Allison Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 2:22 PM
what a lovely picture to accompany your lovely rhyme :-) hugs jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 4:58 PM
I thought that one just expressed the feelings of the poem..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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