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© Combustible the Country Rap - Artimus The Poet - Susan Manley 8/04/2024 All Rights Reserved 

From my album "The Push and the Pull" was created as a collaboration with my good friend and fellow Suno Ai musician The Digital Cowboy. 

This song was entirely written and created by me but using the musical genre developed by The Digital Cowboy and I together "country rap". 

Let me know what you think! - Susan

 

[Guitar instrumental intro] I feel just like tinder whenever you are around you get to your sparking and embers form around I can't help but start glowing you set me all on fire you know it too those embers are for you you set my world on fire [Chorus] Combustible! but only for you How did you turn my world upside down? Keep me up all night long! Combustible! You sear me with your kiss I am eager for your glances and hang on every word [Verse 2] And when we get behind closed doors and we are on a page I am afraid the bedclothes suffer the housekeepers deserve a wage We barely eat We barely sleep We are at it again Like twin flame throwers amen ! [Chorus] Combustible! We burn down the house We don't see anyone else The world fades away  and you steal my breath away I can't help but start glowing you set me all on fire you know it too those embers are for you you set my world on fire [Chorus] Combustible! But only for you How did you turn my world upside down? Keep me up all night long! [Guitar Solo] And when we get behind closed doors and we are on a page I am afraid the bedclothes suffer the housekeepers deserve a wage We barely eat We barely sleep We are at it again Like twin flame throwers amen ! [Chorus] Combustible! We burn down the house We don't see anyone else The world fades away  and you steal my breath away [Outro]

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Date: 12/22/2024 3:28:00 AM
Hey Susan, great rhythm to you rap and that is a very good video... I do like the flow and the chorus to this one.. Nicely done .
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