Combo In Colombo

21/11/2013

In a warm morning in Colombo
There is a package in a bow
And a letter say, "Love, I'll be home tomorrow"
A gift and love memo, what a perfect combo

*Since Im living in Colombo, it will be rude to not mention it, atleast once ;)
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February 18, 2016 at 11:56 AM
Dinda, great little write. linda
Dietrich Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 6:41 AM
very sweet. and the title is so cute.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 8:52 AM
Sounds wonderful.
Onclaud Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 11:15 PM
so darn charming, dinda.. my hear skppied a beat!... huggs
Horne Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 3:32 PM
lovely sweet write - hope the weather's good today in Colombo : )
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