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Combatant Instant Telegram

heartbeat hammering not looking back at treason carried by the wind
2/16/2016 Poetry Contest: Instant Telegram - Sponsored by: Nathan D.
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Marcum Wong Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 9:08 PM
This is one brilliant haiku Eve! I hope to see it a top winner. #7
Callus Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 2:14 PM
I like the unique creativity of this haiku, Eve. It is suggestive and makes the reader delve deeper into the subject. gl in the contest. // hugs.......paul
Nance Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 7:11 AM
Powerful to ride on, I enjoyed your haiku Eve!
Trifiatis Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 3:34 AM
Excellent Haiku, dear Eve. Good luck!
Davey Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 2:47 AM
can envision the whole scene perfectly, very nice Haiku and good luck in the contest
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