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Comanche Trail

You brought along your wisdom as we were were walking down this Comanche Trail the images we saw the truths you spilled I will not ever tell You let me into a hint of your world and made it part of mine I treasure the memory unlike anything I could possibly find You make the day into night as your voice echoes in the wind you kissed me that night yet you remain foremost a deeply loved friend forgotten the place we left we were on top of the world that day your son and your lil sister as well I love the thought of Comanche Trail I will honor the images always walkin mountains with someone you love the sweat, and the laughter the hours fly and the water goes down so smooth ever after member the lil boy who gave me something to read as many were caught by our presence triple takes and such even strangers saw our intensity i honor our moments very much

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