Colourful Day

Friday,
The black morning,
Huddled masses await,
Pushing forward as doors open,
Bedlam.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Adams Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 7:09 AM
Don't know why they call it Black Friday, but I avoid it at all cost. Nice Cinquain, Frank.
Dietrich Avatar
November 26, 2012 at 2:41 PM
hahaha, yes, that sure describes it. I enjoyed walmart on friday. there were not so many people as I had expected!
Palmer Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 10:39 AM
nice write Frank
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