Colors In the Night

Red, Blue, yellow shiver, Into the night to warn sight, Far Far it goes by. Written: 10/17/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 19, 2016 at 12:52 AM
Daniel, I was reading your comments below... Thank you for the reply to my old comment. LINDA
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October 18, 2015 at 5:04 AM
Daniel, this is the most original haiku. But, I have to admit the colors did fade with the night. Enjoyed the comfort and imagery. Linda
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October 18, 2015 at 11:48 AM
That's good i thought the way I wrote it I should switch the ended to where the colors are. Making shiver being the closer.
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October 18, 2015 at 10:10 AM
In a good way
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October 18, 2015 at 9:42 AM
Thank you and what you mean that the colors fade in the night like in a bad way or good way puzzle on that
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October 18, 2015 at 9:40 AM
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