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Colors In the Night

Red, Blue, yellow shiver, Into the night to warn sight, Far Far it goes by. Written: 10/17/15

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Date: 2/19/2016 12:52:00 AM

Daniel, I was reading your comments below... Thank you for the reply to my old comment. LINDA

Date: 10/18/2015 5:04:00 AM

Daniel, this is the most original haiku. But, I have to admit the colors did fade with the night. Enjoyed the comfort and imagery. Linda

Daniel Perez
Date: 10/18/2015 11:48:00 AM

That's good i thought the way I wrote it I should switch the ended to where the colors are. Making shiver being the closer.

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 10/18/2015 10:10:00 AM

In a good way

Daniel Perez
Date: 10/18/2015 9:42:00 AM

Thank you and what you mean that the colors fade in the night like in a bad way or good way puzzle on that

Daniel Perez
Date: 10/18/2015 9:40:00 AM