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Colorful Hues

colors cover the sky
 an arc of explosion
   rain drops


colorful hues
hanging from the heavens
crystal prism


5/11/12

naturehaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

June 7, 2012 at 9:11 PM

back to this one, sure is a beauty. About my stepdad. he died six years ago. My real dad is alive and well. he is mentally ill so he is hard to live with and mom left him when I was five. I am in contact with him and he is married to a woman whose life he is making miserable. Such is life. Very hard for many people! Thanks for asking. Have a restful evening. LUv, Andrea

Nette Onclaud

May 25, 2012 at 2:41 AM

a rare delight, phyllis.. super congrats!..:) huggs!

Poet Destroyer A

May 24, 2012 at 6:16 PM

WOW! Phyllis, i have never experiences such a crystal clear rainbow image.. i love the hues and explosion in your haiku... Congratulations, with your ROYGBIV of beauty~ always*PD..

Andrea Dietrich

May 24, 2012 at 4:48 PM

Phyllis, for me this was even better than what you got on the list. It's wonderful. Congrats on your win.

Phyllis Babcock

May 24, 2012 at 5:37 PM

thanks Andrea-glad you enjoyed the haiku. It has been learning process on the face book group

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 24, 2012 at 11:57 AM

Congratulations on your 3rd place win in my "Rainbow Haiku Weekend"contest Phyllis. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

John Loving Iii

May 21, 2012 at 8:04 PM

even if those hues are grey.

Keith Bickerstaffe

May 14, 2012 at 6:14 PM

soup mail :)

Keith Bickerstaffe

May 14, 2012 at 6:13 PM

sorry for the double entry!

Keith Bickerstaffe

May 14, 2012 at 6:12 PM

Remember me? I remember you!!! These are two beautifully contrived verses, full of life and love. Well done, my dear!! Best wishes, Keith

Keith Bickerstaffe

May 14, 2012 at 6:12 PM

Remember me? I remember you!!! These are two beautifully contrived verses, full of life and love. Well done, my dear!! Best wishes, Keith

Keith Bickerstaffe

May 14, 2012 at 6:12 PM

Remember me? I remember you!!! These are two beautifully contrived verses, full of life and love. Well done, my dear!! Best wishes, Keith

Carolyn Devonshire

May 13, 2012 at 4:30 PM

This is a lovely entry for the rainbow contest, Phyllis. Winning wishes for you! Also, I hope you'll enter my contest as they way you describe the colors would work well. Hope you are doing well, dear. Love, Carolyn