Colorful Flashes

yellow and black flash almost touching my shoulder tiger swallowtail Heidi Sands 6/22/25 (C)opyright

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/23/2025 6:58:00 AM

- A great haiku, Heidi :) - hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/23/2025 10:46:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise. Hugs :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/22/2025 8:08:00 PM

Kind of cool! Hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/23/2025 4:31:00 AM

Thank you Kim :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/22/2025 7:54:00 PM

How that 'near-bump' made me jump. ~ Sally and I, Dr. Suess P.S. I really did almost jump when I read this. ~ gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/23/2025 4:30:00 AM

Lol. Thank you Gershon :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/22/2025 12:25:00 PM

Your "Colorful Flashes" are a wonderful Haiku write. Hugs... Have a blessed day and week ahead writing away...........

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/22/2025 1:02:00 PM

Thank you so much Paula. It is nice to see your comments. I appreciate them. :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/22/2025 9:41:00 AM

Very nice haiku Heidi, hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/22/2025 9:51:00 AM

Thanks Joseph . Hugs :)