Colorful Flashes



              yellow and black flash
        almost touching my shoulder
                    tiger swallowtail


Heidi Sands

6/22/25

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 4:23 PM
what a captivating poem...imagery is outstanding!
Sands Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 4:25 PM
Thank you so much Sara. :)
Legros Kelley Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 10:05 PM
I love butterflies. I miss them since I have not planted my flower gardens for the last couple of years or so! Sweet lil' poem Heidi! <3
Sands Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 5:34 AM
I do too. Thank you BJ :)
Bayles Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 9:11 PM
I like it.
Sands Avatar
June 30, 2025 at 12:27 PM
Thank you. I am happy you like it. :)
Kauffman Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 11:48 AM
Just delightful, Heidi! Butterfly wings do flash as they flit in the wind. I had a butterfly land on my shoulder once and I was so surprised, and enchanted, I could hardly breathe, let along move, hoping to remain in that enchanted moment! Blessings.
Sands Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 12:37 PM
That is so nice. A special experience. Thank you Sam :)
Andresen Avatar
June 23, 2025 at 6:58 AM
- A great haiku, Heidi :) - hugs
Sands Avatar
June 23, 2025 at 10:46 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Hugs :)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 22, 2025 at 8:08 PM
Kind of cool! Hugs
Sands Avatar
June 23, 2025 at 4:31 AM
Thank you Kim :)
Wolf Avatar
June 22, 2025 at 7:54 PM
How that 'near-bump' made me jump. ~ Sally and I, Dr. Suess P.S. I really did almost jump when I read this. ~ gw
Sands Avatar
June 23, 2025 at 4:30 AM
Lol. Thank you Gershon :)
Goldsmith Avatar
June 22, 2025 at 12:25 PM
Your "Colorful Flashes" are a wonderful Haiku write. Hugs... Have a blessed day and week ahead writing away...........
Sands Avatar
June 22, 2025 at 1:02 PM
Thank you so much Paula. It is nice to see your comments. I appreciate them. :)
May Avatar
June 22, 2025 at 9:41 AM
Very nice haiku Heidi, hugs
Sands Avatar
June 22, 2025 at 9:51 AM
Thanks Joseph . Hugs :)
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