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Colorful Blanket

I wake up in early morning, to the cool air outside Slowly the sun rises, bringing warmth to the remnant of last night The day unfolds a colorful blanket of beauty to see Heidi Sands 5/24/18

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 5/29/2018 11:30:00 AM

So nice. This form seems to be attractive to me. Best Wishes.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/29/2018 12:44:00 PM

Thank you. That is great to hear :)

Warren Doll

Date: 5/25/2018 3:36:00 PM

Very beautiful, Hedi

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/25/2018 3:45:00 PM

Thank you Warren :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/24/2018 11:09:00 AM

Only been here since last November, Sijo, another one I must look up. But the beauty of colour of each new day . Lovely verse Heidi. Tom.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/24/2018 11:21:00 AM

It would be nice if you try it Tom. Thank you :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/24/2018 8:25:00 AM

Such a lovely expression," Colorful Blanket" Very nice Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/24/2018 8:27:00 AM

Thank you Mike. It is my first written Sijo form poem :)

Joseph May

Date: 5/24/2018 8:09:00 AM

The colors come to life...Nicely penned..

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/24/2018 8:12:00 AM

That is nice to hear. Thank you Joseph :)