Colored Water

Parents wonder why children lie
But is this quality unique to them in the hive?
Blue is the water that has been colored 
This is all children will ever know 
Truth shall not be fostered 
You reap what you sow

24 August 2021
Bite Size Poem no18 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier
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Radhakrishna Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 12:38 PM
Hi Shreya nicely written! I saw your who am I contest! you do not have soup mail, so I could not mail you! read my poem self written a few moths ago! I have expressed similar thoughts! get a soup mail. It is helpful to share ideas and views. regards Krish
Ln Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 8:58 PM
Thank you Krish. I appreciate it! I actually do have soupmail.
Fenn Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 10:15 PM
Very thought-provoking poem, Shreya! Good luck in the contest.
Ln Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 8:50 PM
Thank you so much!
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