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Colored Water

Parents wonder why children lie But is this quality unique to them in the hive? Blue is the water that has been colored This is all children will ever know Truth shall not be fostered You reap what you sow 24 August 2021 Bite Size Poem no18 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 9/3/2021 12:38:00 PM

Hi Shreya nicely written! I saw your who am I contest! you do not have soup mail, so I could not mail you! read my poem self written a few moths ago! I have expressed similar thoughts! get a soup mail. It is helpful to share ideas and views. regards Krish

Shreya Ln
Date: 9/4/2021 8:58:00 PM

Thank you Krish. I appreciate it! I actually do have soupmail.

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 8/28/2021 10:15:00 PM

Very thought-provoking poem, Shreya! Good luck in the contest.

Shreya Ln
Date: 9/4/2021 8:50:00 PM

Thank you so much!