Collecting Memoirs

Collecting my dreams from a treasure chest
I hug Snoopy and Troll dolls one last time,
They knew my little secret childhood crime 
So I tagged their backs with hums, sublime
And no one understood  my tight unrest. 

Opening a box, keepsakes fell somehow
Velvet frocks  saw my look, a tender pain,
And more for sale; my heart started to rain
Oh memoirs I had to let go…again, 
As teapot brewed, feeling alright for now.

A classic watch peeped like a dangling star
It’s glass frame broken, yet alive and warm, 
Dad slow-dancing me in the blue rainstorm
I saved this above all, without doubt or norm 
Cherishing his touch so near, though skies afar.


Anthony Slausen's Treasure Chest Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Devnath  Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 11:46 AM
Beautiful heart of treasure where memories are there in your chest. A nice picture you have drawn how past memories can be rummaged. Lovely done. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
Horne Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 2:22 PM
awesome write, Nette - a winner for sure
Sivey Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 9:44 PM
You have written a gorgeous write my friend! I really loved the tenderhearted treasure chest you have written about, so full of emotions and dreams of the past! I truly enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
Hunter Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 9:10 AM
Darn!...that's good. Your poems are always so lovely and ....dreamy. I've never read one that I didn't enjoy, Nette.
Tacito Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 7:49 AM
I understand the emotions in this piece all too well...wonderful job.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace