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With chinchilla glass
ocean waves lapping my toes
fancy flights take off.

Wren pecks at my thoughts
as it perches on tree stump
posing as prince toad.

Caveat flashing light
intrudes in my dreamy state
warns me to leave prince
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nunez Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 9:06 AM
Lovely images. Is this modern haiku then? I'm still trying to perfect my traditional haiku...
Costales Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 11:09 AM
I must confess I don't know much about haiku. just trying to emulate the 5-7-5 lines in a stanza but sometimes I'm not content with just 1 stanza when my thoughts are still bubbling to be expressed.:)
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