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Amongst scribble crayoned clouds and an autumn sun, Honey butter, pure and innocent flow as one. Tiny undistinguished flickering candlelight Losing itself in serenity of the dim sky's sight. Fading away unseen into the quite formidable sigh In a soft glow those hangs on the edges and dance up high. Amidst nature's forest deep, evolving a work of art, Deposited in people's hands most fascinating heart. Passionately and unhurried moon veils the sky In luminous ebony capturing their adoring eye. 10/18/2020 Collaboration With The Silent One Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 10/23/2020 6:07:00 AM
Beautiful write Eve, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 10/22/2020 11:18:00 PM
Just loved the line "Passionately and unhurried moon veils the sky". I'm one of those adorers of the moon in her ebony realm. Great win for you, Eve ~ Congrats!
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Date: 10/22/2020 5:19:00 PM
Congrats, Eve. Beautifully done.
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Date: 10/22/2020 4:04:00 PM
Lovely poetry Eve, congrats.
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Date: 10/22/2020 3:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Eve, a wonderful collaboration with Silent One, loved every word. Belle
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Date: 10/21/2020 6:34:00 PM
You too Eve....this is incredible...love it
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Date: 10/21/2020 3:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your top placement, Eve!!
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Date: 10/21/2020 12:54:00 PM
First two lines are brilliant and great way of describing it... lovely imagery in your poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/19/2020 1:49:00 AM
Nicely done Eve. Very soothing God Bless, JB.
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Date: 10/18/2020 11:23:00 PM
Your poetry is of a high standard. Mine seems to be waning. Oh well. Bound to happen with all this stress. ~~
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Date: 10/18/2020 6:24:00 PM
Eve, your poem is extremely nicely depicted. Honey butter etc. Evolving, unhurried, adoring. Night sanctity grasped through your sophisticated and spicy translation.
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Date: 10/18/2020 6:18:00 PM
A fascinating collaboration, Eve!!
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Date: 10/18/2020 5:05:00 PM
Congratulations to the both of you for a beautiful collaboration! :)
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