Collaboration With the Silent One

Amongst scribble crayoned clouds and an autumn sun,
Honey butter, pure and innocent flow as one.
Tiny undistinguished flickering candlelight
Losing itself in serenity of the dim sky's sight.
Fading away unseen into the quite formidable sigh
In a soft glow those hangs on the edges and dance up high.
Amidst nature's forest deep, evolving a work of art,
Deposited in people's hands most fascinating heart.
Passionately and unhurried moon veils the sky
In luminous ebony capturing their adoring eye.


10/18/2020


Collaboration With The Silent One Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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May Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 6:07 AM
Beautiful write Eve, Congrats on your win..
Watt Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 11:18 PM
Just loved the line "Passionately and unhurried moon veils the sky". I'm one of those adorers of the moon in her ebony realm. Great win for you, Eve ~ Congrats!
Evans Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 5:19 PM
Congrats, Eve. Beautifully done.
Smith Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 4:04 PM
Lovely poetry Eve, congrats.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 3:55 PM
Congratulations on your win Eve, a wonderful collaboration with Silent One, loved every word. Belle
Davidson Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 6:34 PM
You too Eve....this is incredible...love it
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 3:47 PM
Congratulations on your top placement, Eve!!
One Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 12:54 PM
First two lines are brilliant and great way of describing it... lovely imagery in your poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Ball Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 1:49 AM
Nicely done Eve. Very soothing God Bless, JB.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 11:23 PM
Your poetry is of a high standard. Mine seems to be waning. Oh well. Bound to happen with all this stress. ~~
Ermine Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 6:24 PM
Eve, your poem is extremely nicely depicted. Honey butter etc. Evolving, unhurried, adoring. Night sanctity grasped through your sophisticated and spicy translation.
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 6:18 PM
A fascinating collaboration, Eve!!
Sands Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 5:05 PM
Congratulations to the both of you for a beautiful collaboration! :)
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