Collaboration Wild-Wind Rose

Maybe the boy is "crazy", but "crazy" for the sake of art.
...You thought: "I can see, I am etched in the boy's heart,
but he is still 'flying,' he is still striving to take off, he has
'wind' in his head." Quote from a Chagall letter: To My City Vitebsk*

WILD-WIND ROSE

Stirs emotions supernal — Chagall’s Bella catching the cerulean wind.
High, a kite with eternal surrender. Her Marc never shears the string.
Zephyr of bling, facet of reflections in the moorish blue-diamond sky.
Mourning spouse clings to her angel wings.

Provokes intoxication of her white-linen collar — a candle sputters
the yearning of passionate colors — a tightrope walker tiptoes
between the earth and heaven’s gate, too many years to wait.
The artist brushes a wild-wind rose.

He wanted to shake her out of every snowglobe he put her in.
Freely, he had imprisoned her in his paintings — his creations,
and forever his precious wife was shut in with a gold-plated key;
Chagall signed. . . to exalt admiration.

7/14/2019
for contest FINETUNE THIS COLLABORATION sponsored by Line Gauthier

*From Wikipedia
**Wind Rose - a diagram showing for a given place the relative frequency or frequency and strength of winds from different directions (Merriam-Webster)
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Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 1:59 AM
Congratulations, Kim on your top win.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 4:29 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Ravidas Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 9:12 AM
Supernal colors, sounds and feelings of this poem made me leave the ground. The most weightless and indigo gold I've ever seen. Congrats and fave :3
Rodrigues Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 3:48 PM
What a resplendent comment! Thank so much, Kurt! :)
Gauthier Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 5:48 AM
Thanks for entering my contest. Love your concept, Kim. Congrats on your top win.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 5:58 AM
Thank you, Line! <3 Kim
Y. Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 5:26 PM
Wow Kim, You really did a good using Line's verse and created a well written piece. I see an Anthology book with this fine poem it. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 5:58 AM
Thank you, Alexis!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 3:06 PM
"He wanted to shake her out of every snowglobe he put her in. Freely, he had imprisoned her in his paintings — his creations," - this is a wonderful write. If it is not in the winner's circle, I do not know Line and I KNOW Line! Wow! Kim, you have blown me away with this one.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 4:52 PM
Thank you so much!
Rose  Avatar
July 14, 2019 at 9:01 PM
You have done more then fine tune this collab, you gave it wings and then you took it home/ Love it, a winner by far, have a great evening dear Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2019 at 9:03 PM
Wow! Thanks, Pixie!
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