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Collaborating With Trixie My Muse

So many possibilities parade up and down the perimeter of the page. Some wiggle their petootsies at me; one sticks out her tongue. Being super confident, adorable, and quietly intrusive is the rage. The word LUCKY gives me an Eskimo kiss, making me feel young. Lucky what? My muse asks, as she lies on the edge polishing a nail. She does not care if this poem works or flatly bombs, a total fail. I pretend we are friends and suggest a few things to go with lucky. She laughs her head off with a donkey kick, making me feel suckly. I start making a list of what we could do with this pristine page. The elves, gnomes, faeries, and brownies take over, they are all sage. I write lucky penguin, sweet crocodile, happy peacock and tiny giraffe. I know I am still being made fun of when I hear Trixie’s evil laugh. So, what is your idea? I ask her, and she grabs the pen from me. She makes whirls and twirls, dots, slashes, dashes, D’s, F’s and a B. I study what she has done, and I have to be sort of kind. Because after I read it I see that Trixie has a super brilliant mind.

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Date: 6/3/2022 9:49:00 AM
Oh, I absolutely agree. However, if she becomes too pesky, send her east and she can stay with me. I really like this poem, Caren, because it speaks to the poet's method. A bit longer than your usual. It's a FAVE though.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/3/2022 11:20:00 PM
Thank you Hank. I rather liked it myself.
Date: 6/3/2022 6:12:00 AM
LOL…as one who loved in Catholic School to put curlicues at the end of words only to be disturbed by the habit’s stare: “She makes whirls and twirls, dots, slashes, dashes, D’s, F’s and a B.” I also love: “ Some wiggle their petootsies at me; one sticks out her tongue.” I’m taking a chance and sticking out my tongue at Trixie hoping she laughs!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/3/2022 11:21:00 PM
She is coming to get you Kim. You will not be able to hide hard enough! But give it a go.
Date: 6/3/2022 12:58:00 AM
Caren you amaze me with your constant output of BRILLIANT poetry, can I borrow Trixie please my muse is still misbehaving for some months now! hugs Jan xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/3/2022 11:22:00 PM
Jan, I shall ask her if she wants to come visit you for a bit. She is open to the idea but has to have her own room with an orange bathroom - orange sink, orange toilet, orange tub. This is nonnegotiable. How soon do you want her?

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